第1篇：英语小作文
邀请信
Dear________,There will a ________________（内容）at/in________________（地点）on___________（时间）.We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________（具体时间）.This will be followed by a _______（进一步的安排）.At around______（时间）,____________________________（另一个安排）.I really hope you can make it.RSVP before ____________（通知你的最后期限）.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
例二
Dear_____________,①_____________（开门见山提出事件/活动、地点、时间）.②It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.③During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in.④First, ____________（要举行的活动内容一）.⑤Second, __________（要举行的活动内容二）.⑥I know/believe that you will be very interested in_____________.⑦First/For one thing, _____________（受邀请人参加的理由一）.⑧Second/For another, _____________（受邀请人参加的理由二）.⑨The conference/party would not be complete without you!
⑩The party/conference will begin at 时间and we do hope you can come.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
请求信
例一
Dear___________,I am writing to formally request to___________（请求的内容）
The reason for ______________is that______________________________（给出原因）.I________, so I ___________________________________（给出细节）
I would also like to request ________________________（提出进一步的要求）.I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________（电话号码）.I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
投诉信
Dear_______,I am_______________________.（自我介绍）I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my diatisfaction is ______________（总体介绍）.In the first place,_________________________（抱怨的第一个方面）.In addition, ____________________________（抱怨的第二个方面）.Under these circumstances, I find it ___（感觉）to ____________________________（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）.I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________（提出建议和请求）, preferably __________（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by ______（设定解决事情最后期限）.Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to
your reply.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
感谢信
Directions: While your family was on vacation, your friend, Cathy looked after your dog, smart.Now you came back, write a letter to her to show your gratitude.Your letter should be no le than 100 words.You don't need to write the addre.Don't sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Emily instead.Dear Cathy,I am writing to expre our heartfelt thanks for taking good care of smart while we were on holiday.He was such a happy dog when we got home;we knew he must have had lots of loving attention.When we used to pick up from the kennel he would whimper and carry on for hours.You not only saved us some money, you also spared us the worry of how he was doing while we were away.Your kind help is very much appreciated, not only by smart, but also by our whole family as well.Yours truly,Emily
译文
我写信是要谢谢在我们度假期间你帮助我们照顾小狗。我回来时看见它是那么高兴，就知道你对它一定很好。以前每次度假回来，去寄存中心接它时它总是非常难过，要持续几个小时。
你不但帮我们省了钱，也使我们免于对于它的担心。对于你的帮助我们都非常感谢。你真诚的：艾米丽
道歉信
范文
Directions: one of your pen friends, John, will be visiting your city.However, for some reasons, you can not meet him at the airport on time.Write a letter asking to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to recognize you.Your letter should be no le than 100 words.You don't need to write the addre.Don't sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Alice instead.Dear John,I am eagerly looking forward to your visit to our city.After all these years of writing to each other, I can not wait to see you.However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport on time.The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the earliest I can reach the airport will be about an hour after you land.Will you please wait for me in the arrival lounge? You can have breakfast while you wait.By the way, as we have never met I must tell you home to identify me: I am of 165cm tall and have a long hair.In addition, I will wear a white skirt and carry a China Daily at hand.Hope we can meet soon.Sincerely yours,Alice
译文
亲爱的约翰：
我非常期待着你来参观我们的城市。这么多年来我们一直通信，我早就想见到你了。但是很抱歉我不能按时到机场接你。
因为你的飞机是一大早就到达机场，而我最早也要1小时后才能到。你能不能在旅客休息室等我，你可以利用这段时间吃早饭。
随便说一句，因为我们没过面，我得告诉你怎么找我：我大概1.65米，长发。另外我会穿一件白色的裙子，手上拿一份中国日报。
希望早点见到你。
你真挚的：艾丽丝
备忘录
范文
Directions: Someone put forward a proposal to adopt the “punch in” system in her memo in June 12, 2006.Write a memo to her with the information below.Your memo should be in no le than 100 words.To: Mr.Brown manager of operations
From: Betty Green Supervisor
Subject: comments on the “punch in” system
Date: September 21
This is further to your memo dated back to June 12, 2006, in which you proposed that the employees adopt the “punch in” system.I fully agree with you that we should take measures to increase the productivity and that we would a tighter control over the employees if the “punch in” system is adopted.However, honestly speaking, I don't think that adopting a tighter system will increase productivity.The most effective way to increase productivity, in my opinion, is to give the employees more incentives to work.I think we could further discu other poibility of achieving this goal.Your consideration of this suggestion would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,Betty Green
译文
这是回复你2006年6月12日的备忘录，当时你建议所有的员工采用打卡考勤制度。
我非常同意你的看法，我们应该采取措施提供工作效率，如果采用打卡考勤制度我们可
以更严格的控制员工。但说实话，我并不认为实行打卡制度就可以提高工作效率。我认为，提高工作效率最好的办法就是给员工更多的鼓励。对于实现这一目的的方式我们还可以继续探讨。
希望你能认真考虑这个建议。
你真挚的：贝蒂格林
祝贺信
Dear Jack,Heartfelt congratulations on your graduation from the Graduate School.I have good reasons to feel proud of you.I know the degree of master meant many years of aiduous study and hard work.Now you have come through with flying colors and high honors.I have heard of your excellent record in research and extra curricular activities.In this you took the right road to emerge as a fully developed young man to society.I take pride in your achievements and avail myself of this opportunity to extend to you my best wishes for your succe and happine.Yours sincerely,Wang Li
亲爱的杰克：
真心地恭喜你从研究生院毕业。
我有足够的理由引你为豪。我知道这个硕士学位代表着你多年来的勤奋学习和辛苦工作。现在你已经胜利而光荣地度过了这一关。我已经听说了你在科研和课外活动方面的优秀成绩。你走了一条正确的道路，使自己成为一个有益于社会的全面发展的人。
我为你的成绩感到骄傲，并借此机会向您致以良好的祝愿，祝你今后取得更大的成绩，幸福愉快。
你诚挚的：王丽
咨询信
范文
Directions: You are going to study at a foreign university.Write a letter inquiring about the specific information as regards accommodation, fees and qualifications there.Your letter should be no le than 100 words.You don't need to write the addre.Don't sign your own name at the end of the letter, use Li Hua instead.Dear Sir or Madam,I am a Chinese student who wishes to pursue further study at your university.I plan to start my course next semester, and it would be highly appreciated if you would provide me with some eential information.First, how much are the tuition fees? Though I intend to be self supporting, I would be interested to know if there are any scholarships available for international students.Second, I wonder what qualifications I need to follow a course at your university, now I have got a master's degree in a Chinese university, is it enough? Third, as regards to accommodations, if poible, I would like to have a single room, but if single rooms are expensive, I would be willing to share.I am looking forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
亲爱的先生/女士：
我是一个中国学生，我想到贵校继续深造。我打算下学期开始上课，如您能告知我一些基本的信息将感激不尽。
首先，学费是多少？尽管我想自费，但如果有为国际留学生提供的奖学金我也非常感兴趣。第二，我想知道到贵校上学需要什么资格，我现在拿到了中国一所大学的硕士学位，这样可以吗？第三，至于住宿条件，如果可能我想要单人房间，但如果单人房间太贵，我也可以合住。
我期待着您的回复，更希望早日成为贵校的一员。
您诚挚的：李华
考研小作文：投诉信的写法
写作“三步走”：
说明投诉问题—>描述具体情况—>期待解决方案
Dear Manager,I venture to write to complain about the quality of the digital camera I bought last Friday at your store.During the five days the camera has been in my poeion, problems have emerged one after another.For one thing, the screen is always black, making the camera no different from a traditional one.For another, the battery is distreing as it supports the camera’s operation for only two hours.Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another camera or declare a refund.I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.Yours,Li Ming
尊敬的经理：
我冒昧给你写这封信，投诉我上周五在您商店里购买的数码相机的质量问题。购买至今的五天中，各种问题一个接一个地出现。一方面，相继屏幕总是黑屏，我们使用起来仿佛和传统相机没有区别。另一方面，电池的状况也不尽人意，只能支持相机工作两个小时。因此，我希望可以换一个相机，否则我要求退款。我希望这个问题能够得到足够的重视。谨上，李明
闪光词汇及词组：
venture: v.冒昧，斗胆
in sb’s poeion: 拥有
emerge: v.显现出来
one after another: 一个接一个
make sth no different from sth: 使…和…没有区别
distreing: adj.令人苦恼的，使人痛苦的
第2篇：英语小作文
1、A Happy Day2、A Little Wish3、A Pen and a Pencil4、Fly Kites5、Four Seasons6、Have a fun holiday7、I Like My Village8、My Bedroom9、My Best Friend10、My Best Friends11、My Dog12、My Dream13、My English Teacher14、My Family 115、My Family 216、My Family 317、My Favourite Sport18、My Favourite stamp19、My Good Friend 1 20、My Good Friend 221、My Grandfather's Garden22、My Hometown.23、My Little Cat24、My Lovely Home25、My School26、My Uncle27、My Winter Holiday28、Myself29、Spring
A Happy Day The weather is getting hotter and hotter.The summer holiday is coming.What a happy day!Birds are singing in the trees.Butterflies are dancing in the garden.Children are playing in the park.Some boys are playing on the slide(滑梯).Some boys are listening to music.Other boys are reading under the big tree.Some girls are drawing pictures.Other girls are playing on the swings(秋千).I like roller-skating(滑旱冰)in the square.And my clamates are playing football.We are very happy!
点评台：这篇文章描写了同学们和自己在假期里快乐的一天，表达了他们对假期的喜爱以及在假期里自由自在、放松自我的心情。读后有种很想加入他们当中，与他们分享快乐的愿望。整篇文章用词准确，语言生动，中心明确、突出，是一篇很成功的文章。文章级别：A。
A Little Wish Look!What's that? It is our homeland's spaceship.The spaceship is as bright as the stars.It can move.I am proud of our astronaut because I have a wish.I want to be an astronaut.In space, there are many materials.If I were an astronaut, I will be able to know more about space.I think the scene will be very great.On the one hand, I am going to enjoy the scene of the earth.On the other hand, I am going to see some stars.This is my wish.I hope my wish will come true!
点评中心：文章题材新颖，标新立意，让我们了解到虽然只是一个小小的愿望但却包含了对探索宇宙的好奇及对我们地球家园的热爱，同时也感受到小作者立志成为一名宇航员的伟大理想。最后希望小作者能够再接再励，写出更多、更优秀的小文章，同时也祝愿你梦想成真！
A Pen and a Pencil
I have a pen and a pencil.The pen is very nice, but the pencil is so dirty.One day, the pen met the pencil.The pen said to the pencil:“ What a dirty pencil!” The pencil said :“Yes.I'm dirty.But I can write words.” “I can write words，too.Now,let's see who can write more words.”
They began to write.They wrote and wrote.The pen wrote lots of words on the paper.The pencil wrote lots of words on the paper, too.After a long time ,the pen hadn't any ink(钢笔水)left(剩下).The pencil became short, but he could still write.At last ,the pencil won.The pencil said :“Ha ha...ha ha...Who won, you or me ?”The pen drooped(低下)his head.Then he said to the pencil :“I shouldn't laught at(嘲笑)you.You are good, too.”
点评台：这是一篇很成功的文章。文章不仅立意新颖，更重要的是寓意深刻。同时，也能看出小作者有着丰富的想象力。希望在今后的学习中充分发挥自己的想象，写出更多、更好的文章。文章级别：A。
Fly Kites Today is a shining day, the sky is blue, the wind is strong.My grandfather and I are going to the park to fly kites.My grandfather takes me to the People's Park.We fly my “Rocket”.“The wind is too strong, the kite can't fly!” I say.My grandfather looks and says, “Let me try!” “Sure!” So my grandfather catches the string and I hold the kite.“Follow me, one, two, three, run!” I run with my grandfather quickly.Oh!It's so wonderful!The kite is flying up with the wind.I am so happy and ask my grandfather, “Why can't I fly it up, but you can?” My grandfather says with a smile on his face, “Because you fly the kite against the wind.” “Oh, I see.” I nod my head happily.We play in the park until late.We enjoy ourselves.点评中心：小作者用平实的语言描述了风筝从飞不上天到飞上天的过程，特别生动、形象，同时又结合小作者与爷爷的对话，让人看完以后有种身临其境的感觉，仿佛放风筝的活动历历在目。
Four Seasons
Spring is green.Do you know why? It is because when spring is here, the plants and the trees sprout new leaves and turn green.The flowers start to bloom.It is so beautiful and green everywhere.Summer is bright.Can you gue the reason? It is because when summer arrives, the sun is shining.For the very strong sunlight, everything is bright.How beautiful and bright it is!Autumn is golden.Why is this? It's because when autumn comes, the wind blows through the golden trees and carries the golden leaves away, flowing slowly down to the ground one after another and thickly covering the ground.It is golden everywhere.Winter is white.Why? It's because when winter reaches us, the white snowflakes fly slowly down, so pure and white.The wide fields and the great high mountains all wear white coats.Oh!The four seasons are all beautiful and charming.I like spring, summer, autumn and winter, but spring, the best!For spring is full of life.点评中心:小作者以“四季”为题目,开篇直接切入四个季节,以阐述四季的不同为主线,分别进行描述.文章用词准确,语言丰富、生动,语法基本正确.希望继续努力,成为未来的作家。
Have a fun holiday!Come to Shenzhen and have a fun holiday.Shenzhen is a new and modern city.The weather here is very pleasant.The trees and gra are green every season.In spring, the weather is warm.You can go hiking.In summer, the weather is hot, but you can go to the beautiful beach.You can swim there.You can make a sandcastle(沙堆城堡), too.In autumn.the weather is cool, but not dry.You can fly kites in the parks.In winter, it's not cold.You don't need to put on more clothes.You can play sports then.There is lots of delicious food here.You can drink morning tea and afternoon tea.You can eat seafood(海鲜), too.In Shenzhen there are many famous places.You can go to the Window of the World.You can go to Happy Valley, too.Don't wait.Come to Shenzhen and have fun, fun and fun!点评中心:通过对深圳四季的描写,给我们展现出了一幅四季如春的美丽画面。在深圳,可以到海边堆沙堡, 可以吃海鲜, 还可以去美丽的世界之窗游玩…… 所有这些都深深地吸引着小读者们,不愧为一篇成功的小作文。
I Like My Village Hello,dear friends!Welcome to my village.It's big and beautiful!I like it very much.Look!There are many houses in the village.They are small.There are many high and beautiful mountains near the houses.There is a big forest behind the houses.There are many big trees in it.There are many rivers in front of the houses.The water is clean.There are many fish in the rivers.There are many bridges over the rivers.There are many big trees on the river banks.And there is gra and flowers on it.The gra is green.The flowers are colourful and beautiful.There is a lake in the village.There are many ducks in the lake.The sky is blue.The rivers flow.The air is fresh and clean.My village is very beautiful!I like it very much!
点评中心：I Like My Village。本篇文章采用生动、细致的描写方法，勾勒出一幅美丽、和谐的乡村图画。文章在用词方面比较准确，多处采用There be句型。但有些地方可用连词连接，无需再重复使用There be句型。
My Bedroom My name is Mike.I have a comfortable bedroom.There is a desk, a bookshelf and a bed in my bedroom.I do my homework in my bedroom every evening.The desk is in front of the bookshelf.There are many textbooks, English books and story books on the shelf.My bed is near the windows.There are some flowers on the windowsill.The curtain and the sheets of my bedroom are blue.Because my favourite colour is blue, too.Dear friend, do you like my bedroom? 点评中心：My Bedroom针对自己卧室里的几件物品进行了介绍，为同学们展示了一个干净舒适的小天地，值得一提的是文中使用了一些生词，使文章增色不少。在这里建议其他同学学习，努力多掌握些单词，从而写出更加精彩的英语作文。“Very Good!”。
My Best Friend Ma Qi is my best friend.She is a girl.she is ten years old.She has short black hair and big eyes.she likes to sing.Ma Qi and I are in the same cla.We always study, draw pictures and play ping-pong together.After the school, we often go to the park.We often play a game of Hide And Seek there.We have a good time.点评台: My Best Friend语言流畅，叙述清楚，描述了自己与好朋友一起学习、生活的快乐时光，如果小作者能够运用已学过的知识再对好朋友的外貌特征和衣着作一番细致地描写的话，相信文章内容就会更加充实。“Good!”。千万不要骄傲呀，还要继续练习写作，使自己能够写出更好的文章。
My Best Friends
Jim and Kim are my best friends.Jim is short, thin and quiet.But Kim is tall and strong ,but not fat.After cla, Jim is different from Kim and I.Kim and I like to play soccer.We often kick the ball on the playground.But Jim doesn't play with us.He likes to read books in the library.Sometimes he likes to listen to music.In the evening, Jim often helps Kim and me with our English.We talk a lot and laugh a lot.We are best friends.点评台：向大家介绍了自己的两个好朋友。语言流畅，用词准确，没有语法错误，字里行间能体会到小作者与两位好朋友之间的深厚友情。另外，从整篇文章中也可以看出小作者的英语基础知识掌握得很牢。希望今后的学习中写出更多，更好的文章。文章级别：A。
My Dog Hello, everyone!I am Wang Ze.My English name is Mike.I have a cat and a dog.I like my cat, but I like my dog better than my cat.My dog is two years old.It has two black eyes, a black nose and a small mouth.Its body is white.It is as white as snow.My dog is very lovely.I like my dog very much.点评台：文章My Dog首先向读者问候，并简单介绍了自己，随后通过简略的描写使一只可爱的小狗形象跃然纸上，能够吸引读者的注意力。对于初学者而言，能写出这样的习作确实不容易，值得大家学习。“Good！”，继续加油啊！
My Dream I am a handsome boyl.My name is Mike.I like drawing.My dream is to have a white house with a white wall, a white roof, a white floor.I can draw a red car on the wall, and I can drive the car around the world.I can draw a plane on the roof, and I want to take the plane to the sky.i can draw a sailing-boat on the floor, and I want to take the sailing-boat acro the sea.点评台:这篇作文“My Dream”，形式新颖，风格独特，用词得当，语句通顺。此文章充分地体现了小作者丰富的想象力和较强的写作能力，是一篇成功的文章。同时，希望张灿小朋友能坚持练习英文写作，相信你一定会写出更好的英语作文。“Very good!”。
My English Teacher Mi Shan is my English teacher.She has two big eyes.She is thin and short.Her hair is very long.She is very beautiful.Her English is very good.She always play games with us in English cla.So her cla is very interesting and shi is kind to us.She like us and we like her too.I like my English teacher.How about you? 点评中心: 文章写得比较简单,词语使用准确, 语言朴实无华,字里行间表达了小作者对英语老师的喜爱之情, 但不够具体, 如果能指出老师的爱好、习惯等，文章会更加充实，希望你继续努力,写出更加优秀的文章来。
My Family I have a happy family.There are six people in my family.They are grandpa, grandma, father, mother, elder sister and I.My name is Yang Yuan.I am a pupil, I'm in Grade 5.I like English very much, I read them every morning.I often listen to the English tape.My grandpa is an accountant(会计).He is very busy.My grandma is a farmer.She does the housework.My mother is a farmer, too.She cooks every day.My father is a worker.In the evening he likes watching TV.While he is watching TV, he often tells us not to talk.My elder sister is a middle school student, she isn't good at English, but she likes maths very much.All of them love me, and I love them, too.I have a happy family.I love my family.点评中心:这篇文章主要描写了家庭成员的职业，My Family更适合做这篇文章的标题，整篇文章条理清楚，语言简练，用词准确，没有语法错误，可见小作者的英语语言基本功很好，希望杨园同学在今后的学习中继续发扬这个优点，不要骄傲，写出更多的好文章。文章级别:B。
My Family Hello, everyone!Today I am going to talk about my family.My name is Mike.I am in Cla 1, Grade 4.l like English very much.I like hamburgers.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.Look, this is my father.He has two brown eyes, a big nose and a small mouth.He is an engineer.He is very handsome.Look, that is my mother.She has two big eyes.She is an engineer too.She is very pretty and kind.My family is not big, but we have many friends.We are happy.I love them very much and they love me too.讲评中心：文章写得比较简炼，词语使用准确，语言生动，字里行间表达了小作者对家人的爱。但不要骄傲，继续努力啊！文章级别：A。
My Family There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.My father is a driver.He is 37 years old.He like eating oranges.My mother is a worker.She like eating apples.My name is Mike.I am 9 years old.I am in Cla 3, Grade 3.l like eating hamburgers.I am good at English.I study hard every day.点评中心：My Family 语言流畅，描写得当，用平实的语言向读者介绍了家庭中的每一位成员的基本情况，美中不足之处就是缺乏对家人之间和睦关系的描述，使文章略显平淡了一些。“Good！”,还要继续努力啊
My Favourite Sport My favourite sport is swimming.I often swim in the pool.I swim twice a week.When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy.I look like a lovely fish in the pond.I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy.It can also bring me a lot of happine.Of course, I like watching this sport.I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.点评中心:这篇小文章语言精炼、准确,短短几句便勾画出了一幅生动、活泼的画面。
My Favourite stamp I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.Look, there is a chick in this stamp.The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail.Its feathers are yellow and brown.This stamp is very beautiful.I like this stamp very much.Mi Wang点评台集邮不仅可以增长我们的见识，同时也可以陶冶我们的情操。本文的小作者就是一个集邮爱好者，看小作者所描述的小鸡邮票多么可爱呀！感兴趣的小朋友可以试着收集邮票啊！Mi Wang要奖给姚晗小朋友一个“Very Good!”,继续加油啊！
My Good Friend Hello!My name is Maggie.I have a good friend.Her Chinese name is Wang Qi.Her English name is Mary.She likes fruit very much.Her favourite color is blue.She is very beautiful.She has small eyes and wears a pair of glaes.She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse.She is very tall.She likes swimming and playing football.She is a good student.We are in the same school and the same cla.But we are not in the same row.I like her very much.We always play together.讲评中心：文章比较详尽、完整地描述了她的好朋友的特征，包括了好朋友的外貌、喜好等，文章词语使用准确、语法正确、主题突出，“Good!”，不要骄傲，继续努力啊！
My Good Friend I have a good friend.Her name is Zhang Hong.She is 9 years old.She is a pretty girl.She has long hair and big beautiful eyes.They look like stars.Her favourite colour is pink.Her favourite animals are cats and rabbits.She likes to play badminton very much.Her favourite cla is English.She studies very hard.She is a good student.I love her very much.I will learn from her.本文围绕My Good Friend这一主题，运用所学英语知识，针对好朋友的外貌、爱好进行介绍，为读者展示了一个活泼、可爱的小女孩形象。Mi Wang要奖给孟婷婷同学一个“Very Good！”。同时，孟婷婷同学也要继续努力练习英文写作呀！My Grandfather's Garden
My grandfather has a small garden.There are many flowers in it.I think all the flowers are beautiful.My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning.First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers.Then, he waters them.When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy.My sister and I like the garden very much.We often play in it.Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.One day, my brother picked a flower.My grandfather was very angry and sad.He said to my brother, “My child, don't pick the flowers.That's not a good deed(行为).” My brother felt very sorry for that.And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now.I like my grandfather's garden.点评台：向大家描写了爷爷的花园，虽没有太多华丽的词语，但能使读者感受到花园的美丽和花儿的芳香。通过描写爷爷对花园的精心料理以及对弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不仅仅是写爷爷的花园，也从字里行间中看出了小作者对爷爷的敬佩之情。文章条理清楚、意思连贯，没有语法错误，是一篇很成功的文章，希望再接再励！文章级别：A。
My Hometown My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city.It is located(座落)in the southwest(西南)part of Guangdong Province(省).My hometown is famous for Diaolous.Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous(Please look at the picture.).It was built in 1923.The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡垒).It is tall and magnificent(雄伟的).People praise(赞扬)it for “the No.1 Tower” of Kaiping.I like my hometown.点评台：小作者的My Hometown主要描写了家乡著名的碉楼，其中重点向大家介绍了“开平第一楼”--瑞石楼，抒发了自己对家乡的热爱之情。整篇文章语句连贯，没有语法错误。文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者继续发扬这个好习惯，并写出更多的好文章与大家分享。文章级别：A。
My Little Cat Hello!I'm Becky.This is my little cat.I like it very much.Its name is Do Re Mi.It's very beautiful.It's gray.It has triangular(三角形的)ears, round eyes,a black nose and a small mouth.My mother calls it “Little Baby”.When I'm at home,it often follows me in and out.My little cat loves to eat fish and sleep a lot.It's very fat,but it's nimble(机敏的).One day,I saw it run fast in the sitting room.I thought it might find a mouse.It was running after the mouse.They looked like playing hide-and-seek.About three minutes later,it brought me the mouse.I was happy.So I touched it with a smile.“You have done a good job,Little Baby.” I said.Then it jumped up and down and ran away.Do you like my little cat?Tell me, please.点评中心:向大家介绍了小猫的外貌，还主要描写了小猫在某一天捉老鼠的情景。整篇文章主次分明，语言简炼、生动，没有语法错误。同时，字里行间能使读者感受到小作者对小猫的喜爱之情。
My Lovely Home I live in a small village named Fengyi.I live in an old building.It was built in 1999.It has three floors.On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom.On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms.One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me.On the third floor, there is an attic.It's my study, it's quiet.I like to study there.When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony.There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy.My parents clean it every day.I can also do some housework.My friends, do you love my home?
点评中心：My Lovely Home开篇直接切入本文主题，首先从房子的结构开始介绍，句子简洁、通顺，接着又重点描述了与自己有关的几个房间，语言生动、贴切，最后又抒发了自己对家的热爱。
My School Hello, friends!Welcome to my school.My school is beautiful and very big.There are many rooms in the school building.My claroom is on the sixth floor.There are sixty-nine students in my cla.You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher's desk.My seat is near the door.The computer room is on the third floor.There are many computers in it.I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂)is on the first floor.We have lunch there.Look!This is the playground.We often play games on it.There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow...I have a good time every day in my school.I like my school very much.点评台：文章向大家描述了他学校的教室，食堂，微机室以及操场，其中重点描写了自己的班级，主次分明，层次清晰，正确地运用了There be句型和一般现在时时态，是一篇很成功的文章，文章级别：A。
My Uncle My uncle is a profeor.His name is Chen Hao.He teaches Chinese in a university.He is tall and thin.He wears a pair of glaes.He likes reading.He has a big study at home.It's very bright.There are many books in his study.He often reads and writes in his study.He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much.He is very kind to me, too.He often sends me books.I like him, too.点评中心：本篇小文章描写的是小作者的叔叔，首先从她叔叔的职业、外貌开始描写，接着又描写了她叔叔的爱好--读书与写作。表达了小作者对其叔叔的崇拜与敬仰之情。文章条理清晰，用词准确，无语法错误，是一篇较优秀的文章。
My Winter Holiday This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family.Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think.The sky is blue and the air is clean.You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere.The weather there is great.It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it “Spring City”.Kunming is surrounded(围绕)by beautiful scenery.And one of the most famous views is “The Stone Forest”.It is really scenic(自然风景的).We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.点评中心：寒假虽然已经过去一个多月了，但是在这个假期所发生的事大家是否还都铭记在心呢？作者就把她的这份心情用笔记录了下来。小作者通过在寒假期间去美丽的春城--昆明游玩，抒发了对美好自然风光的热爱。文章生动、形象，用词准确。
Myself Look at this photo.A little boy is climbing a tree.Who is the boy? Gue, please!Yes, it's me.My name is Zhu Shaoyu.I'm ten years old.I'm very naughty and smart.I have big eyes and short black hair.I'm thin and tall.I'm a student.I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City.I'm in Cla One, Grade Five.My favourite subject is English.I study English very hard.I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it.Now I can speak English well.I obtained the First Award in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students.I will study harder in future.My favourite master of ceremonies is Li Yong, because he is very funny.My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge.It makes me learn English better.My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious.I like its taste.Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me?
点评台：几乎每个人都很了解自己，所以要是介绍自己，可写的内容很多。但小作者并没有平均分配笔墨，而是重点描写了自己的几个“最喜欢”。整篇文章条理清楚、重点突出、语言流畅、用词准确，可以说写得很成功。希望同学们向朱劭宇同学学习，写出一篇篇精彩的文章与大家共同分享。文章级别：A。
Spring I like spring because spring is beautiful.Many flowers are very lovely.Some gra and trees turn green.Look!A little girl is flying a kite with her father.She likes to fly kites.Her father is smiling.It's very warm today.So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky.They're playing together.They look very happy.A breeze is blowing over the land.The sunlight is soft.A clear river is flowing.How beautiful the spring is!点评台:这篇文章篇幅虽短却写出了春天的生机与活力.特别是小作者着重描写了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明确.用词准确、生动,没有语法错误也是这篇文章的另一优点.文章级别:A.29
第3篇：英语小作文
考研小作文万能模板！
（小作文要求100字，所以写100字左右皆可）
一、辞职信 Dear()，I am much grateful to be employed by you two months ago as a(n)().I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and other collages.The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life.However, as a young man whose primary interest is in()rather than(), I find my present job does not fal
第4篇：英语小作文
一、辞职信
Dear Manager Wang, I am writing this letter to extend my rough decision for quitting the job.I really hope that you could take into account my grieving situation as losing orientation in the work.Honestly speaking, my salary appears remarkably low compared with other same-level co-workers’.After all, I have got a Bachelor’s degree so that I sh
第5篇：英语 小作文
假设你叫王丽初中的学习生活即将结束。请完成下面对老师表达感谢和祝福的卡片。（5分）
Dear Mi/Mr.Li,Thank you for _____ us so well.You’re so _____ to me.I’ll never ____ you.Wish you happy, ____ and young for ever.Everything goes well.Best_____!
From Wang Li
假如你是王东，你今天生病了，头疼，医生建议你休息两天。请你完成下面的请假条。（5分）
Dear Freeman,I’m sorry to tell you that I’m not ______ well today.I’ve had a bad _____.The doctor
第6篇：英语小作文
英语小作文
在日常生活或是工作学习中，大家都接触过作文吧，作文是一种言语活动，具有高度的综合性和创造性。你知道作文怎样才能写的好吗？以下是小编整理的英语小作文，希望能够帮助到大家。
英语小作文1
一般来说，应用文要求言简意赅，表意明确。对于应用文的书写，可能考生会比较头疼。专家总结多年英语辅导经验，为考生提供一些小技巧。
既然是应用文，必然有严格的格式要求。以书信为例，如果题干中的写信对象是关系较亲密的朋友可以直呼其名为Dear xx，其他可以称呼为Dear Mr. xx或Dear Ms.xx。如果姓氏不明确，一般称呼为Dear Sir or Madam。另外，正文的书写格式也要注意。一般来说，首段开头必须要开头空四个字母。
应用文不要求华丽的辞藻，但是用词准确是最基础的要求。如果书信对象是正式的团体或
第7篇：英语小作文
询问信
Dear Sir：
I would like to inquire about some information on(主旨),I would be very grateful if you could reply as soon as poible.I shall be grateful if you could have details concerning(主旨)available.we would be grateful for many further information you may be able to give us about the(主旨).Would you please tell me ….I am looking forward to a favorable
第8篇：英语小作文
五、书面表达（本题1个大题，共30分）
保持健康对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为应该如何保持健康呢？请以How to keep healthy为题目，写一篇80-120词左右的短文，首句已给出，不计入总数。
1、要点提示：
（1）健康的饮食
（2）经常运动，强身健体
（3）健康的生活方式，早睡早起，不熬夜
2、语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁
How to Keep Healthy
I think it is very important for us to keep healthy参考答案：
How to Keep Healthy
I think it is very important for us to keep healthy.As a student, we can’t study well witho
第9篇：英语小作文
英语小作文
在学习、工作乃至生活中，大家一定都接触过作文吧，作文是由文字组成，经过人的思想考虑，通过语言组织来表达一个主题意义的文体。怎么写作文才能避免踩雷呢？下面是小编帮大家整理的英语小作文，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。
英语小作文1
My hobby
im color. my hobby is eating things. because i like junk food , sweet food and meet.
sometimes i eat more sweet food .i will have a toothache ,dont eat meet and make me feel sick .i always like eating junk food .sometimes my br
