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北京卷情景作文
1、个人经历（I）；
过去时，以时间为线索，以I 为主角，偶尔有配角，一般用together with sb表达出来；常常有“道具”，用with结构表达出来。
2、集体活动（We）；
过去时，以时间为线索，以We为主角，经常包括“讨论”、“分工合作”等段落；
【高分情景作文框架及常见段落写法】
在试卷分析中，我们发现：
1、普通的作文往往上来就讲故事，而高分作文却能通过加上开头段和结尾段，形成完整的文章结构，轻松获得老师们的青睐；
2、普通作文能够把故事说清楚，而高分作文能够通过对细节的描写，把故事讲生动；
3、普通作文是生硬地写故事，读者一旦离开了图画，便不知其所云，而高分作文能够通过对人物心情的描写，让读者即使不看图画，也能身临其境；
4、普通作文没有场景、时间的过渡，故事情节缺乏连贯性，而高分作文善于利用简单的过渡词，将原本散乱的“漫画”变成连贯的“动画片”，让故事连贯一致。
因此，我们的作文应该写成这样的框架：
1、主题段
2、图画描述段
一图一段，包含以下四大内容：过渡/要点/细节/心情*
3、总结段
以下是对这种作文框架的详细介绍。
一、主题段；
主题段要用简洁的语言讲清以下四件事：
1、什么人？
2、在什么时间？
3、什么地点？
4、做了个什么事儿？
如果想要表现高超的写作能力，还可以在主题段中融入第5件事：
5、这个故事是针对什么问题发生的，反映了什么深刻意义？
【常见写法1】Last Sunday was memorable when I/we/our cla had a meaningful and interesting spring outing/green action/monitor election/experience(on that day).解释：这个写法是用一个名词来概括整个故事，如spring outing,monitor election等等。
【升级】
我们发现，这个写法其实是用一个memorable来感慨故事发生当天的经历。Memorable是个形容词，所以我们可以利用前面独孤九剑中的第三件——倒装——来进行句式的升级：
So memorable was last Sunday when....此外，我们还可以运用感叹句的技巧来升级：
How memorable was last Sunday when...!
注意：划线部分可以改成具体词；
【常见写法2】
Last Sunday was memorable when I/ we did sth/managed to do sth（on that day）.解释：当不方便用一个名词来概括故事的时候，可以用行为（动词）来概括
【升级】
So memorable was last Sunday when I did sth.How memorable was last Sunday when I did sth！
【终极写法：在具体写故事之前，先写一句这个故事将体现的某种“深刻的意义”】
就像某些中文文章里写的：“时光荏苒，流年不再，我们往往是真的失去了，才懂的珍惜。记得那是2002年的第一场雪......”
Thanks-giving/ Environmental protection/ Family education/ Family relationship/ Optimism/ Being optimistic/ Being brave is always of growing importance in our society/in our daily life.Such is a memorable experience that taught us another leon of the significance/ importance of it.这个段落里面，加粗部分就是我们在作文中经常讴歌的一些“深刻的意义”。一定要把这些单词记熟，尤其要学会用“Being + adj”来表达优良品质的用法。
二、图画描述段；
“一幅图写一段！”
1、过渡；（用时间、地点来过渡）
2、主题；
这幅图讲了个啥？
3、细节
图画中一般要包含六大细节：
时间 地点 人物
天气 道具 表情；
4、人物心情、想象或感受；
【常见段落写法】
{1}“讨论”段落；
（1）Last Friday, A heated discuion was held in our cla on what/how/where to do...before(然后)a final decision was made that 用一句话来说讨论结果.注：that引导同位语从句，解释final decision的内容
（2）Last Friday, A heated discuion was held in our cla on what to do....Several opinions were given such as A,B and C before a final decision was made that最终讨论结果(一句话).注：A B C都用doing sth结构
{2}“出发”段落
（1）Early in the morning, with the sun rising from the horizon /east , we set out/started to do sth, chatting and laughing all the way，feeling extremely excited.（2）Early in the morning, bathed in the warm sunshine, we set out to do sth, chatting and laughing all the way, feeling extremely excited.{3}描写“分工合作”的场景
（1）Some...Some...Others...Still others....（2）A is doing sth1 while B is doing sth2.（3）While B is doing sth2, A is doing sth1.（4）We joined our effort to do sth.（一起努力做某事）
（5）Works are aigned to us such as doing A, doing B and doing C.{4}描写“感受”或“心情”
（1）Exhausted/ Tired as we were, we/I felt our/my time and effort worthwhile.（2）We were extremely joyful to see...（3）When the work was finally done, we all had in our heart a sense of achievement/accomplishment..（4）The work finally done, we all had in our heart a sense of achievement.{5}“到达”段落
（1）The moment/The minute we arrived at...，we started to do sth in a flash/immediately/with no hesitation.（2）No sooner had we arrived at...，than we started to do sth.（3）Hardly had we arrived at...，when we started to do sth.（4）Upon arrival, we started to do sth in a flash.三、总结段；
From this experience, I learned that...【常见写法】
From this experience, I learned that we Chinese young generation/high school students/teenagers are supposed to take the responsibility to do sth1 instead of doing sth2.Only in this way can our society/ family /cla/school/life be flooded with harmony and happine.【必备例文】
（2010年北京卷情景作文）
Last weekend was memorable when I helped my grandparents arrange a trip to Beidaihe.Early on the Saturday morning, I,together with my grandparents,surfed the Internet for some neceary information such as the weather, the hotel and the train tickets.In the afternoon, I took the subway Line No.2 to the Beijing Railway Station to buy them tickets.To my surprise, there were too many people waiting, accordingly/ consequently,it took me almost 4 hours to get the tickets.I felt extremely joyful/delighted.In the evening,back home, I, with my grandma's help, packed into a suitcase a lot of neceity(必需品useful things)including clothes, shoes, map and umbrella.I was sure these things would help them enjoy themselves there.The next day, we went to the station together where I said/kied/waved goodbye to them and saw them off.They seemed to be very excited.Hopefully they would have a great time.（I hope...= Hopefully...）
From this experience, I learned that we teenagers are supposed to take the responsibility to do whatever we can to care for the old/senior members in our families.Only in this way can our family be flooded with harmony and happine.（2008北京卷情景作文）
Environmental protection never fails to be of growing importance in our daily life.Such is a memorable experience that taught us another leon of the significance of it.Last Sunday, a heated discuion was held in our cla on what to do for the spring outing.Several opinions were given such as going boating , visiting the amusement park and climbing a mountain before a final decision was made that we would go mountain-climbing.Early in the morning, with the sun rising from the east , we set out to climb the Maoershan mountain, chatting and laughing all the way.In the afternoon, the moment we arrived at the top, we surprisingly found different kinds of litters here and there thrown by the former visitors, such as cans, bottles, banana peels and plastic bags.We felt rather disappointed.In a flash, we started to join our effort to pick them up.Finally, we managed to get them together and put them into two different bins, recycling and non-recycling.Exhausted as we were, we felt our time and effort worthwhile.We teenagers are supposed to take the responsibility to do whatever we can for the environmental protection.Only in this way can our society be flooded with harmony and happine.总结：常用时间词
Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Saturday Sunday
January February March April May June July August September October November December
in the morning/afternoon/evening
at noon/midnight
at/on the Father's day
at the beginning
/then/after that/ finally
as soon as/ the moment/ the minute 一....就
No sooner...than.../Hardly...when...Sb1 be doing sth1 when sb2 do sth2就在那时，突然
While Sb1 be doing sth1, sb2 do sth2
立刻、马上 in a flash/ at once/ right away
曾经 once/ the other day
After doing sth, sb started to do sth.【例句】
No sooner did we arrive at the top of the mountain than we found litters here and there such as...Hardly did I went back home when I started to pack some useful things in to a suitcase for my grandparents.The moment we arrived at the top of the mountain we found litters here and there.Old Fish was taking a shower when a beauty rushed in.While Old Fish was taking a shower, a beauty rushed in.总结：常用地点词
On the way to the gathering point
Outside the school gate
In the claroom/school hall
Back to school,...Back home,...In the car,...On the bus,...In the street，On the road，turn right on the second corner
turn right at the second croing
【举例】
On the way to the gathering point, we first climbed a mountain,and then swam acro a river before(然后)we finally walked into a forest.【补充例文】“我为哥本哈根减斤碳”
5月28日劲松笔记
Low-Carbon living
Last Friday was memorable when we held an activity that we all lead a low-carbon life for a day.Early in the morning, with the sun rising from the east, we went to school by bike or on foot instead of taking buses or taxis.At school, no sooner did we finish the claes than we remembered to turn off the lights as well as the computers in order to save the energy.（意义）
When studing, we used double pages of each work sheet so that paper would be well saved.（意义）
After school, we went shopping in the supermarket as usual.However, this time, we chose to use the environmental-friendly shopping bags.From this activity,I learned that we teenagers are supposed to take the responsibility to do whatever we can for the environmental protection.Only in this way can our society be flooded with harmony and happine.
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