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执笔人：高新艳
小组成员：韩媛媛，黄亚楠，谢丽丽，于洋
The Peril of Plastic
For a long period, our country has kept a close eye on the protection of environment in order to build a harmonious society.So the departments concerned have already taken measures to deal with the different kinds of pollution, which are the main threatening against our environment.But the use of plastic in large ma as one kind of white pollution utterly and completely perils our environment.Undoubtedly, the environmental protection aims to decrease or even avoid the pollution.Yet the plastic can really cause severe white pollution.Consequently, the plastic should not be used.Still, there is another strong belief in people’s minds encouraging them to use plastic as much as poible.That is the plastic constitutes great parts of the things we used in our daily life and it is really more convenient for humans.What’s more, just like Hegel said, exist, that was reasonable.So people use plastic without any anxiety.It is in the same condition that when a person gets cold, though he knows that the medicine itself can do harms to his body, he has to take it, just because the medicine at the same time has good effect on his cold.The fact of the person taking medicine for treating cold shares similarity with the fact of people using plastic for convenience.In reality, on one hand, some departments set laws and build systems of environmental protection.They call for citizens to protect environment in the minor matter.They encourage people to use sack instead of plastic bag.On the other hand, our people ignore the laws and appeals, and spare no effort to use different kinds of plastic for their convenience.May be when they see the plastic bags go with the wind in the sky and pollutes the water, they will be alarmed and begin to regret their abuse of plastic.But when they turn around, they still pick up a plastic bag and use it without any regret.Every coin has two sides.The convenience that plastic takes for us is great, but people still cannot ignore the serious pollution it takes for us, which is against our environment.The plastic itself cannot be condemned, but the awarene of our people in protecting environment really should be built and raised.黄亚楠：
1.“gets cold” means feels cold instead of “catch a cold”.2.“build systems ” I think “establish systems” may be much better.3.Our people 是我们的人民的意思哎，我们人类应该是humanbeing
4.Environment 可以和build and raise 搭配吗？
Protect and rebuild the environment
于洋：Your composition has both advantages and disadvantages.The advantages are:
1.The using of syllogism and analogism in paragraph 2;
2.Clear structure.The disadvantages are:
1.Grammatical mistakes:
1)“the” used in sentences “…deal with the different kinds of pollution” should be dropped
2)“more” used in sentence “it is really more convenient for humans” should be change into “very”, because there is no contrast in this sentence.2.Accuracy:
1)“cannot” in last paragraph sentence 3 should be change into “should not “, I think it will be more accurate.2)If you can change “our people” used in paragraph 3 and 4 into “people”, I think it will be more objective.All in all, you have done a very good job！
韩媛媛：
In the first paragraph, the author gave us the status quo.In second paragraph, syllogism was used in the first three sentences.From here we can see the author learned the textbook very attentively.However she should trust her readers, believing that her readers can tell the major or minor premise of it.so “Undoubtedly”、” Yet”、” Consequently” were redundant”.” The Peril of Plastic ”is not fully developed.The analogy used in this paragraph is well chosen.In the third paragraph, the author continued to show us the comparison between “law” &”people’s behavior”, but the conflict between regulations and people’s incorporation is not confined to convenience, for example, the cost of the substitution.The last paragraph, the beginning is an awkward expreion, though it’s a famous saying , it’s not so appropriate.The whole arrangement is good, the details can be revised.In my view, according to your thought, you deserve a better work.谢丽丽：Good job!But I thought you could do a better job at your level.Your thought in words shows lack of maturity, which main shows to be in the following respects:
first of all, there is inaccuracy in the use of evidence.Let’s take an example, which is worth reconsidering” Exist, that was reasonable” I don’t think people have to think over what Hegel said for a plastic bag.2,some sentences are too complicated to be understand.I can’t get your point when you say “the fact of …for convenience.” The sentence fails to convey the meaning.the piece ends discordantly, the conclusion is written in haste, while haste makes waste.Last but not least, sentences are repeated.The act of repetition makes your work le succinct.The Peril of Plastic
For a long period, our country has kept a close eye on the protection of environment in order to build a harmonious society.So the departments concerned have already taken measures to deal withdifferent kinds of pollution, which are the main threatening against our environment.But the use of plastic in large ma as one kind of white pollution utterly and completely perils our environment.Undoubtedly, the environmental protection aims to decrease or even avoid the pollution.Yet the plastic can really cause severe white pollution.Consequently, the plastic should not be used.Still, there is another strong belief in people’s minds encouraging them to use plastic as much as poible.That is the plastic constitutes great parts of the things we used in our daily life and it is really very convenient for humans.What’s more, some people even hold the notion that ” Existence, that was reasonable”.So people use plastic without any anxiety.It is in the same condition that when a person catches a cold, though he knows that the medicine itself can do harms to his body, he has to take it, just because the medicine at the same time has good effect on his cold.The fact of the person taking medicine for treating cold shares similarity with the fact of people using plastic for convenience.In reality, on one hand, some departments set laws and establish systems of environmental protection.They call for citizens to protect environment in the minor matter.They encourage people to use paper sacks instead of plastic bags.On the other hand, people ignore the laws and appeals, and spare no effort to use different kinds of plastic for his own sake.When they see the plastic bags go with the wind in the sky and pollute the water, they will be alarmed and begin to regret their abuse of plastic.But when they turn around, they still pick up a plastic bag and use it without any hesitation.The convenience that plastic takes for us is great, but people still cannot ignore the serious pollution it takes for us, which is against our environment.The plastic itself should not be condemned, but the people’s awarene of protecting environment really should be built and raised.
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