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结尾万能公式
1. 结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politene and respect for others.如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2. 结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英语实战演练:
十五、(2009.辽宁卷)假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。
要点:
时间:下周六上午8:00至11:00 内容:采摘苹果
报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00前 提示:带帽子、手套 注意:
1.词数100左右,开头已为你写好。2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:社区 community 第二节:
一、评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3.词数少于80和多余120的,从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差以至影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点
1.时间:下周六上午8:00 至 11:00
2.内容:采摘苹果
3.报名:办公室,下周四下午5:00前
4.提示:带帽子、手套
5.欢迎踊跃参加
【参考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make neceary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本题命制稳健,是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。
第一步:审题
1、看要求:本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件,将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。开头已经写好,这样格式应该已经给出,审题的重点放在要点和要求上:要点有五项,注意有三项,但注意的第一项是重要的一项。
2、理思路:调整要点,讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间,活动的内容,要求、注意事项表达出来;然后再写5和3要点,这样逻辑清晰表达合理。第二步:写作
可以先在草纸上起草,用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达,要尝试最简单的复杂句,如用定语从句、宾语从句等,但句式不易过于复杂,要用一些恰当的连词,使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然。第三步:检查
作文写完后,最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗?时态、语态、动词的数、单词拼写对了吗?标点符号、大小写用对了吗?检查完后再抄写在试卷上,注意卷面的整洁。
【专家简评】
主题与考生学习生活或学校活动无关,但由于是以涉外小区为背景所开展的社区活动,主题空间更为开阔,因此该主题大体符合高考英语写作话题的一般思路,可以归类为外事活动。通常,命题以要点形式给出和以汉语题干形式给出,对考生而言,前者的难度要大于后者。因为要点内容的呈现一般看不出英语的句式结构,而如果是完整或半完整句式的汉语题干却能让考生比较容易辨别出英语句式结构。这本身就是一种便利。因此,对于各命题单位而言,这几种形式都应该依据整卷难度的分布情况加以合理配备使用,以免过难或过易。
十六、(2009.浙江卷)
5月1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果.打扫.聊天等)。假如你是校英语报的记者,请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。
1.时间.地点.任务.活动;
2.老人们的反应;
3.简短评论。
注意:报道的标题和记者姓名已给出(不记词数)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【参考范文】
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Cla Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindne.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
【解析】
本文仍属于提纲式半开放性体裁的作文,选材贴近学生实际,有利于考生的正常发挥,考生只要按照所给要点的思路来写即可。
【专家简评】
09浙江卷的话题和07湖北卷相似,又是志愿者,又是敬老,了无新意。但这并不就说明该卷乏善可陈。若从以考生为本的角度看,该卷第一次出现在题中直接给出汉语拼音人名,而不是汉语人名,这也算是一个首创。目的只有一个:避免考生出错。其实,遮掩在汉语拼音中的人名也让人看不出这个人名究竟是汉语中的哪几个字,因为对于外国人而言,字母人名只是一个符号,他们是无法想象汉字人名所携带着的鲜活感和亲切感的。
浙江卷前几年基本上是选择疑问句式的标题作文。例如:“Film or book, which do you prefer?”(06),请你围绕“How do you prefer your English claes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题…(07),“Working Individually or Working in a Team”(08)。09年不在题中给出标题,却在文中直接给出标题,不知何意?不知这个对于检测考生的实际能力有何帮助?另外,虽然说的是新闻报道,但实际上是一个典型的叙事性质的短文写作。08年仅北京考了一篇叙事性质的写作。09年,除了北京继续考了叙事外,浙江也出现了叙事性质的文体要求。对于浙江考生而言,其写作难度应该远远低于前五年的写作要求了,应该是福。
十七、(2009.重庆卷)
国外某网站举办新一轮网上讨论活动,正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华,经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件,向其推荐话题。
内容包括: 自我简介 写信目录
话题:我们应该感恩(thankful)推荐的理由 预祝活动成功 注意: 1.词数100左右 2.邮件格式已为你给出 3.邮件中不能出现本人真实信息 4.请在答题卡上作答
【参考范文】
Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great succe.【解析】
这是一篇命题巧妙地书写体半开发性提纲式作文。话题树有教育意义,符合中学实际引导学生思考问题。在写作中应注意如下几点:
1.紧紧围绕话题“我们应该感恩”。
2.但自我简介、写信目录、推荐的理由、预祝活动成功都是围绕话题展开。3.注意分清段落层次,上下文的过渡。
【专家简评】
从写作文体要求看,重庆卷04年要求写记叙文,05年则改成议论文,近四年基本上是陈说性质的文体。就话题而言,近四年都与外事活动或外语学习相关。不过,09年的话题是涉外的话题征集,有些特点。六年来,三次短文写作,三次邮件(其中两次电子邮件)。李华同学出现3次(06,07,09)。总的说来,重庆卷一直比较谨慎,命题基本上没有超出全国卷I的范式。
十八、(2009.上海卷)
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外学校举办英语夏令营,开设了如下课程:园艺(gardening),烹饪(cooking),防身术(self-defence),护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名),写一封申请信,报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括:
你感兴趣的课程
你期望从这门课程中学到什么 为什么想学这些内容 【参考范文】
Dear leader,I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses,such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening,because I have liked flowers、graes etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing,I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more,I can realize the bitterne of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another,after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and graes to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。
Yours,Wang yue hua 【解析】
本文是书信格式,报名参加其中一门课程的学习,属于半开放式作文。学生在写作时应注意如下几点:
1.先谈自己感兴趣的学科,从四科中选取自己最有把握和有话可说学科,这是写作的关键,过渡要自然;
2.再写自己希望学到什么,要把握实用性。
3.然后谈出想学这些内容的原因,结合现实,理由合情合理。4.在写作过程中可以尝试句型的复杂化,适度增加情节
【专家简评】 上海卷的一贯特点有以下几条:题干短,话题一般与学习或学校生活相关,写作形式主要是议论性质,间或插以混合性质,给考生的思维空间大。还有一点,从不给出范文。09年的Guided Writing属于混合性质:陈说+议论。话题涉外,且与教育教学课程相关,是很好的话题。但对于上海考生而言,材料的提供是否过于丰富了些?!参看一下惜墨如金的历年上海卷,你就会发现上海卷习惯于提供简练的题干信息,以利于考生的发挥。这次算是一个异数了。
【总评】
2009年高考英语全国卷地方卷共19套,短文写作共20篇(上海卷和广东卷各2篇,宁·海卷共享全国卷I的短文写作题)。综观2009年高考英语短文写作试题,我们发现最重要的一个特点就是关于地方或传统特色话题,也就是母语文化输出类话题增多(5篇),以前只是在某个年份、某个卷种中有这种话题的点缀,现在看来已经蔚成风气。这说明各卷种的命题者们已经认识到了母语文化输出的重要性、紧迫性和现实性,这是最令人感到欣慰的。
强化训练
11、(1分)
假设你是你校京剧爱好者协会的成员,在一次同英国中学生代表团的联欢活动中,你协会将出一个京剧节目。在演出前,由你向外国朋友介绍京剧的由来,按以下提示介绍:
1.京剧在中国很受欢迎,历史悠久,有200年历史,在清朝乾隆年间,乾隆对地方剧
有兴趣。
2.1790年,为庆祝乾隆80岁生日,他召集各地方剧团来京为他演出,4个来自安徽的剧团在庆典后留在北京。
3.1828年,一个湖北剧团来京,在京常与安徽剧团一起演出,两种唱派合在一起,逐
渐形成了一种新剧种,被称为京剧。
4.下面演出开始,希望朋友们喜欢。参考词汇:
地方剧:local opera
乾隆年间:the reign of Qianlong
表演:perform
剧团:troupe12、(1分)
你昨天去游泳患了感冒,今天早上头痛,医生让你休息两天。你用英语给老师写一个请假条。
13、(1分)
假设你是学生会的负责人,你们要组织一次英语讲座,请用英语写一个通知,把讲座的安排:时间,地点,主讲人,内容,以及注意事项通知大家。
14、(1分)
李华父亲的朋友陈伟是在美国居住多年的华裔。因陈伟的儿子陈小明明年要来大陆李华学校学汉语,陈小明来信询问学校情况,以下是小华回信的内容。
1.听说你明年来我校学习,我们很高兴。
2.我校是一所具有80年历史的老学校。
3.学校很美,有许多花草树木,两座教学大楼,一座宿舍楼。
4.学校设备优良,有体育馆、计算机室和大图书馆等。学生除正式课程外,还有许多
选修课,如:油画、打字、烹调等。
5.最重要的是,学校有许多优秀教师,课程有趣,老师既有知识又和蔼,非常愿意帮
助我们,我爱我们的学校,我真希望你也能喜欢我们的学校。参考词汇:
选修课:elective
体育馆:gym
宿舍楼:dormitory building15、(1分)
写信向友人介绍作家鲁迅。
魏明的美国朋友杰克开始学习中国文学,来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。魏明回信介绍鲁迅:
1.鲁迅是著名的中国作家。他不仅是作家,思想家,而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。
2.他的小说被译成多种文字,并被制成电影,如《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片
深刻地揭露了旧社会。毛主席对他有高度评价。他的一些作品还被选入了中学和大
学课本。
3.认为读鲁迅作品对他很有益处。参考词汇:
创始人:Founder
中国文学:Chinese Literature
阿Q正传:The True Story of AH Q
祝福:The New Year’s Sacrifice16、(1分)
提示:为引进外资,进一步加快你家乡A城改革开放。你向一位外商介绍你家乡A城。
1.A城是一新开发的经济特区。它是一座具有三十万人口的临海小城。
2.解放前是一个小渔村,以渔业为主,没有工业,只有几所小学。
3.改革开放以来,许多外商到这里投资,经济增长很快,建立了许多大工厂、一个大
港口。港口与国内外许多城市连接。
4.教育有很大的发展,建立了该城第一所大学。已有三千人从该校毕业。我相信,A
城在不久的将来将更加现代化。参考词汇:
投资:invest
经济开发区:an economic-zone
港口:port17、(1分)
11月11日,你将在家里为你的妹妹15周岁开一个生日晚会,写信给你的外国朋友Peter,邀请他来参加。晚会开始时间是晚上6点,将持续到很晚。告诉Peter每天晚上你都在家,请他给你打个电话告诉你他是否来参加生日晚会,并表达你盼望见到他的心情。
在信的开头告诉Peter你已收到他10月25日的来信,但由于最近一直忙于期中考试未能及时回信。
假设你现在的住址是北京西城区云梯胡同1号楼4门2号。
18、(1分)
给笔友保罗(Paul)的一封信 提示:
1.过了一个很好的寒假,在寒假中与父亲一起回老家河北农村。
2.吃惊于家乡的巨大变化。几乎村里每家都有彩电,许多家盖了新房。有的家还有了
摩托车和小汽车。
3.一位村民自豪地告诉我,他和一部分村民打算参加一个旅游团到国外旅游。
4.我表示羡慕他们,我对父亲说,将来大学毕业要回老家来,父亲也表示说他一退休
就来。
5.你的名字小海。
19、(1分)
张红从广告上得知某公司需要一名秘书。写信应聘。以下是张红的简历。
年龄20岁,即将从职业学校毕业。专业:经济管理(busine management)。学英语8年,会计算机。在过去三年中一直是本校学生报编辑之一,学习成绩在班上优秀。主要是本人喜欢办公室工作,相信能胜任秘书工作。如果能得到这个机会将十分感谢。
请以张红的名义向公司写信写聘。参考词汇:
职业学校:vocational school
专业:major20、(1分)
给朋友小林的一封信,谈谈寒假生活。
1.寒假很忙,因为今年七月要参加高考。
2.每天埋头读书,复习每门必修课,做许多练习。
3.学习刻苦,每天学习10小时以上,累时看会儿电视,听音乐,但总不去影剧院。不
得不回绝亲戚朋友的邀请,只在除夕时打电话问候。
4.多希望没有考试,但又不可能,要尽力取得好成绩。考上渴望已久的清华大学。参考词汇:
必修课:required subject
埋头于某事:bury oneself in sth.参考答案:
11、(1分)
Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、(1分)
Dear Mr.Du,I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully,Li Qing13、(1分)
There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2:00 to 4:00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION14、(1分)
Dear Xiao Ming,I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of gra.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Claes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua15、(1分)
Dear Jack,I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming
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My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businemen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、(1分)Doorway 4, building 1
Yunti Hu Tong
Xicheng District
Beijing 100037
China
November 4th,1995 Dear peter,Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!
I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves,Zhao Ning18、(1分)
Dear Paul,How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!
I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expreed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?
Here are my best regards to you and your family
Yours Xiao Hai19、(1分)
Dear Sir:
How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is busine management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my cla.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong20、(1分)Dear Xiao Lin,I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and clamates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impoible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impoible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!
Yours Wu Qi
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