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I ever have a pet dog ① Xiaobai.He ② was too small to walk.③④ he started be a such alive dog.He was very clever and I kept him in the house.He liked play with me and we often played football together.Xiaobai liked walking, too.I often took him out for a walk.He always followed me, just liked my good friend.Sometimes he also had mistakes.He neighbor’s house and 叼来their shoes or novels.He didn’t mind whether they were good or not.本文作者充满深情地向我们叙述了他和他的宠物狗的故事。文章从小狗的出生、颜色和共同度过的美好时光几个方面，描绘出一幅人狗和谐相处的画面。另外，文章在语法方面还存在不足，具体如下：
①这句话的意思是说当我七岁时。At the age of„„即是“在„„时”，与when 重复，可以改成at the age of seven 或者when I was seven.②be born 表示被动，固定搭配，be有时态的变化，born没有
③almost用在be动词之后，实义动词前,此句改成He was almost dead.④such意思为“如此，这么”，在修饰名词单数时要放在冠词之前。即：such a(an)+形容词+名词.开始做某事用start to do sth.或者start doing sth.因此，改为he started to be such a alive dog.⑤enter在这里是“走进”的意思，后面不跟介词in 或into,直接跟表示地点的名词。
